Come and join me
And let your spirit be free
Come up where we can fly
Come up to where I lie
Walk with me
To a place where you will see
The magic inside you
Old or new
Walk with me
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Ruth, I just stopped back to see if any editing had taken place and I love it even more so now. A marvelous take on this title. More than good.
Thank you again for sharing and being inspired by the title. Love and God bless, Joyce 
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Wow..this is soooooooooo piecefull, I now only want to jump on that train and come to you
Great use of the title too
XXJeannette
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Yay thanks!!
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THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Your words are so inspiring!'s Very uplifting and touching.
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I wish this poem was longer. It leaves you wanting more. Which isn't a bad thing but I think it could be loooooooonger. I will walk with you too!
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i wanna see the magic inside of me...i'll join and walk with you
i like how the poem flows and the background is oh so appropriate
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This is beautiful. Love the background. What a beautiful walk I can picture this being. Beautiful job.
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I'll join you!!! Sounds great.
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yay thank you!!!!
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What a wonderful walk this is and I love what you did with this title. I have to agree with Liz about that line she mentioned. Perhaps saying, "We'll blaze a path across the sky". This has such beautiful imagery and left me with a feeling of warmth and joy. Thank you for sharing your gift with all of us. It's beautiful. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this title. Love and God bless, Joyce
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yea i couldn't think of a better line at the time so I'll fix it shortly!
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I liked this short verse and the background was outstanding. The only line that seemed a bit forced was "Come up to where I lie" since most of us lie down. Welcome to our group. I hope the titles will inspire you and that you will meet and comment on the other poets. Peace, Liz
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