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I Wont Be Leaving Here With You

Tighten your tie
check your face in the mirror
  [looking good]
bringing someone home tonight
[the devil watches over him]

you are a disgrace
[he tells her, before he leaves]
you are a slut and nothing more
[smiles inside while she cries]

good for nothing
[he was the girls everything]
you are a cheater and ugly
[so what happened?]

 

her hands are always reaching out

for his love

and he wont give

pushs her away

 

she packs up her things

puts them away 

says to him

I WONT BE LEAVING HERE WITH YOU.

 

his heart shatters

his pet is gone

he knows he did something wrong....

 

[{He Lost Someone Who Cared}] 

 

Author notes

it wont make since
but it does to me >.<
enjoy.

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  • Sle3p
    February 10, 2008

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    so sad elbi, i think that i get it though *hugz* Whats the matter hun? Loved the first line; call me somtime ebli


    Maddie