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This Point In Time

Emotions run through her,
Like blood through her veins.
Happiness, Tolerance,
Both normal, and strange.
Love overtakes her,
And hate disappears.
She no longer has,
Any worries, or fears.
Where is this coming from?
She asks herself.
There is no way to know,
No way to tell.
But happy she is,
And happy she'll stay.
If only it lasts,
For more than this day.
This moment in time,
Which she has waited for.
For so very long,
That she knows nothing more.
Than the feelings she's had,
for so much of her past.
Why was she so angry?
Why was she so sad?
She no longer knows,
And she no longer cares.
For now she has someone,
Who will always be there.

Author notes

This is for melanie
I love you sweetheart.
You're my best friend forever and always.

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  • piccola silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    nice tribute for someone. I liked the title. The rhyme and flow needs a bit of work, still it was a good job overall. thank you for entering.


  • Dark Otter
    May 9, 2008

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    I did a tribute tonight

    It is important to say I like, care or love you. Our feelings need test drives. Our heart naturally has to take chances. With friends I have that need.