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Fool of the World

There is no fool like the one who walks among the Earth.
It is not the fact that he walks,
that leaves him so inept.
No!
It is the fact that he doesn't see,
he doesn't know,
he doesn't think!

There is no fool like the one I see so often.
Flitting about,
unable to see that truth.
He's throwing his life away!
Leaving no future.

There is no fool like the one who lives in himself.
Thinking of nothing but the next moment.
Never considering the past.
Never thinking for the future.

There is no fool like the one who doesn't think.
There is no fool like one of no mind.
There is no fool like the one of the world.

Author notes

Well I'm not entirely sure if this is quite what you were looking for... But I tried anyway. Hope you enjoyed it! ^.^

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  • daviscth silver member
    February 11, 2008

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    This goes great in my contest. Thank you for taking the time to post this in my contest, Cathy.


  • Field Marhal Benjy
    February 10, 2008
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    A wonderful and very true poem. I hope this opens the minds of the fools.


    • Simply Simple
      February 10, 2008
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      Thank you. That was my goal. Show the fools how foolish they really are. Lol


  • PureRomance
    February 10, 2008

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    This is a fantastic poem that you have penned here. I love it. Best wishes to you in the contest. I hope you win.

    • Simply Simple
      February 10, 2008
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      Thank you. I highly doubt it will be the winning piece. I have read my competition. Regardless, thank you again. ^.^

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