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Mustangs

The clouds paint a picture across the sky
The sun gives the picture color up high
But most of all What I thank nature for
Is the wild mustangs I so much adore


Running wildly and so free
Sometimes wishing that were me
Fur shining from the heat
And I am dancing with the beat

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  • Midnite wolf gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    this is a really good poem, could maybe do with being a bit longer? why do you adore the mustangs so much, what do they make you think about?