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There Is a Place

Lost in a time

that is not my own

If I've never needed anything

I need you

right now

As I plea my way

back to your heart.

Take me,

as I am

there's a place

where only I can go

you'll find me there

among the storms

fighting,

but I am ok

as I await my turn

it is near...

I'll find love again

in truth as I ask

for you to... 

Love me

For Real

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  • Swan song gold member
    March 21, 2008
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    This tugged at the heart strings thank you for entering my contest.


  • Lyrical Rain
    March 1, 2008
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    LOVE THE METAPHORS HONEY. YET ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL WRITE.

  • The Inc
    February 29, 2008

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    Nice metaphoric language in play here. Thanks for sharing with the group.

    Keep penning

    ~The INC."


  • garbait
    February 29, 2008

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    Now this one I truly love. Elegance put simply.
    The background really adds to it as well.
    The FOR REAL love is a rare find.


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      February 29, 2008
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      Thanks again,

      actually this is my favorite as well.
      Very sentimental piece, if I must say.
      Thank you so very much for taking the time to comment on my work.


  • candyhamilton
    February 29, 2008
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    VERY NICE AND I THINK ICAN RELATE TO THIS IN MANY WAYS FOR THAT MATTER WE ALL CAN


  • onesugar gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    I long to be loved for real
    To be loved for the person I am
    This left me with a feeling of longing
    Lubb you ~sugar~


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      February 21, 2008
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      Thank you so much sis

      this piece as many came from the heart.
      I always appreciate your support and comments.


      E♥


      • onesugar gold member
        February 21, 2008
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        You have always got a place in my heart

        The feeling is mutual, you have been an inspiration to me
        on many occassions.

        ~sugarcookie~


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    Love me
    For real,

    how could anyone not...
    This is really lovely
    powerful emotions, deep writing.
    great job.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    February 18, 2008
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    aww it reached me on a more softer
    deeper version like i saw the sunrised i loved
    this


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      February 18, 2008
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      Awww thank you

      yeah, you know I still have my moments. Trying a few things different for the audience
      I appreciate you stopping by...
      E♥


  • HaleyMary
    February 10, 2008

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    Powerful write, Sis. This made me think of how we wish we were loved by a person who is supposed to be a part of our lives, but sometimes it may seem like the love may not have been real, or maybe people loved others for the wrong reasons. I'm not sure if my comment made sense, but I think this piece shows lots of emotion and it made me think of a person wishing to be loved and accepted for who they are. Keep that pen flowing.


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      February 10, 2008
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      Thanks sis

      yeah, it's unfortunate, but so true in many lives.
      I appreciate you so much.
      Ephiphany♥♥♥♥♥


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 10, 2008

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    Wow, this is pretty deep!
    I think that we all feel this way
    at some point in our relationships.
    To be loved and accepted by someone
    can be very challenging and crushing
    sometimes. You can only hope that
    they will open their hearts and minds
    and see you for the person that you
    really are inside and out. Beautiful
    work here my friend and thanks a lot
    for sharing it with us all!




    Jeremy0826


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      February 10, 2008
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      Thanks Jeremy

      one of my DEEP moments
      Just something that came to mind as I sat and watch leaves triffle in the air....Im kind weird like that sometimes, but it's all in the zodiac

      PISCES

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