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Fall Wonders

          as i walk i feel the leaves beneath my feet
            as i strole i hear the leaves crunch
                i smell the sweet winds
                i see the dormant trees
                    i taste the air
              can you guess where i may be
        i am in the wilderness in the quiet fall
              the outdoors can be a wonder

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  • RainbowGirl257
    February 17, 2008

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    wow, this has some great imagery on the season, Autumn, although i think the word 'strole' is spelt stroll. well done!


  • The-queen
    February 12, 2008
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    this poem was thought of in just 5 min. can you belive this

  • New-n-Improved
    February 10, 2008

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    I Like It

    This poem is just right. I can read it everyday because it is simply talent defined. I like your subject matter and I think that this poem should win the gold trophy. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.


  • She burns
    February 10, 2008

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    So beautiful and sweet here, so true, the silence there, it soothes us inside