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Visibly Yours

My eyes still twinkle,
Cheeks still flush
A soft rose
When you softly brush back my hair
And kiss me tenderly.

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  • Naridill gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    Very fluent and calm. The words are uplifting and moving with such an intriguing insight.

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