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All about me

Thinking far away

Taking time for me

Watching straight ahead

Concentrating on only one thing

That only I know of

One thing that may be special or not

Something that means something

to me, only to me

Relaxing while the winds blows in my hair

And the sunlight shines all around me

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  • HeavenScent4U
    February 10, 2008
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    Yes this is very contemplative, thinking is the idea here indeed I think you could have dug a little deeper here though however; I like how you had the words "only to me" in a different color Thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessedThe text was also hard to read with the dark color you used over the text

  • Justin3
    February 10, 2008

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    This has a very calm feel to it, the tranquility emenating from the lines is more than welcome.Great work!