The great ship
Steams across my eyes
Curling steam about my
Natural figure
A model manipulated
Slowly falling
Into a warm pillow.
Keep me close
Protect my dreams
Don't let me go
we'll reach there
Someday
On the run
Author notes
http://blissfullydeadx.deviantart.com/art/THE-CURE-AND-26-YEARS-LATER-63984168
Hrmm doesn't seem to flow greatly today. I might come back to this some day!
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest (February) by Denierim.
600 points, ended March 2, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is such a sweet and love filled poem! I like poems like this; written with so few simple words and holding so so much love inside. A perfect poem for a valentine's day card, I'd say... lol
I do admit it was a bit simple for my personal taste but I still like it a lot. Simply the feeling of love is enough to get me read this poem again and again. Wonderful work with this one!
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Wow sweet write
Chris i hope you don't me doing anything TOOOO silly hahahahaha joke joke...i know you're a grown up man now it's great...but i still like having fun, don't you?
ANYWAY this poem is real sweet hope you didn't have too much ice-cream writing this...i love this part:
A model manipulated
Slowly falling
Into a warm pillow.
the way you write this part..very beautiful *claps*
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this is romantic...nice job chris. <3
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Hehe thaaanks <33
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