the chill of morning’s light
sends shivers
spasms of dawn
sunrise creeping higher
higher
whispered words
“wake, my dear, wake”
as I throw my arms open
to embrace the sun.
Author notes
Picture Credit: New day's blast by ~Mavnor on deviantart.com
A contest entry
- Outdoors. (pic inspired) by RainbowGirl257.
450 points, ended February 17, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I like the way you worded this. You have a way of making the simplest things, such as a sunrise, sound so lovely. I love you!
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wow sis your wording is amazing and so poweruflly captured from the prompt.just amazing best of luck
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nice work!
did you mean 'throw' at line 7?
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Yeah, I did, I thought I corrected it before, but I guess not.
Thank you for commenting!
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love the picture first off. love the poem as well. this one will definitely beat mine lol.
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wow, a good sense of imagery.
well done
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