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Amazing


the more I love you

the more I am loved


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Prompt... Copycat

A contest entry

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  • missparxxx
    February 12, 2008
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    excellent.

    i really like this,
    it's simply amazing.
    =)


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 12, 2008
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      Hi Sparky


      Thanks for saying amazing

      Try my Focus Poems

      Rick


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    " the more I love you

    the more I am loved ".

    Very lovely 10 words, Mr.
    just so you know, you're an easy person to love.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce

    • Endeavor gold member
      February 12, 2008
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      Hi Joyce


      Amazing
      A picture that doesn`t have Nila in it
      Thank you for liking my 10 words
      Cool... I am easy to love, how nice

      Rick


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 12, 2008
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    How sincerely beautiful... x


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 12, 2008
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      Hi Lavender Butterfly


      Thank you for saying beautiful

      Rick


  • BeautifulFlame
    February 10, 2008

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    I agree with this kind of love, love given is recieved and gifted back. Its the way all love should be.
    Such a blessing.

    Love
    ~Lisa~


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 10, 2008
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      Hi Lisa


      Pleased you agree

      A blessing indeed

      Rick


  • WolfHeart
    February 10, 2008

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    Truer words could not be spoken. Love is one thing that increases with the effort we put into it. Very sweet poem!


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 10, 2008
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      Hi WolfHeart


      Thank you for reading me
      We always wish for an increase
      Thank you for the three Bunnies

      Rick


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    Beautiful words to live by...the more you give the more you get...what a wonderful thing love is...you always capture it so well.
    Best to you!


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 10, 2008
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      Hi Mystic


      Thank you very much
      I appreate you

      Rick


  • ScarletO gold member
    February 10, 2008
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    Awww,,,this just hit the spot of sweetness.


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    A mirror image...love to be loved. Very nice thought! Another short write, you are saving on ink!!!

    Bright Blessings!
    Sue


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 10, 2008
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      Morning Sue


      I am getting addicted to these short writes
      Yes, much less ink
      Thanks for the three Smilies Sue

      Rick


  • michellemybelle gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    Lovely words, especially in life, perhaps life's greatest gift. Good luck in this contest.
    Michelle


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 10, 2008
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      Morning Michelle


      Thank you for saying lovely
      Not many words to speak in

      Rick

      PS: Thank you for the three Smilies


  • WhisperingSpirit
    February 10, 2008

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    Yes Rick few lines
    And yet this is true
    I loved this for being such a shortie by you
    Good luck in the contest


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 10, 2008
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      Hi Whispering Spirit


      Thank you
      I am learning to write in few words
      Thank you for wishing me luck

      Rick


  • lake of dremas
    February 10, 2008
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    yeah.. that's how love should be..


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 10, 2008
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      Morning Dark Piano


      Yes my friend
      It is all in the choosing
      Some are magic

      Rick

      PS: Thank you for the three Bunnies

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