Ask you will a yes or no question
feel the force flowing
don't think feel the answer
you seek is all around you
the answer will then become clear
this even Yoda cannot see
simple question you ask yes
is the answer
difficult question you ask
answer not clear
difficult to see always in motion
the force
strong I am with the force
but not that strong
may the force be with you one and all
Author notes
option be inspired by yoda
A contest entry
- Choices Plus Yoda by Kari.
425 points, ended February 10, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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I can hear yoda speaking as i read your poem,
Very cool Good luck in the contest
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The sentence structure is understandably a bit awkward, but I think you've managed to keep everything well enough in line to give this poem the appropriate sense of coherency.
A fine poem!
Blessings,
C
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Yoda...
Yoda is one of the coolest characters ever designed. You have penned an excellent tribute. You have the gratitude of one Star Wars geek. Thanks for entering! -
Hello there and thanks for entering reading your piece i have to agree was moving and very creative thanks for sharing and best of luck to you
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ha ha very funny mum
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