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redemtion song

you shut me inside you bound my voice  

you say i could never get it right
my broken tears, my broken life, my brokenness 
you called it a melody deplight

 therefore i learn to creat my own song

reddemed by the inadaquacy and daknesss

my darkened star shines brigth

free from your scale of write and wrong

   



 

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  • black hearted rebel
    February 10, 2008
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    GREAT!!!

    It was a good poem...but a bit to short!but thanks for entering!