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Roses(Rictameter)

Roses
On thorny stems
Pretty buds,pretty blooms
Colored pink,white ,red and yellow
To the eye,the nose,the touch a delight
Celebrate special occasions
Birth,mothers,wedding days
With bouquets of
Roses.

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Option 8.Roses.
Written November 20th, 2003

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  • piccola silver member
    January 19

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    this is lovely but the rules do state no pre-writes. I forgot to click the button but the rule is clearly stated. Sorry.


  • Poetess12
    March 12, 2008
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    I like this poem. Short but it says a lot. You did a great job. Thanks for your entry.


  • Cat -lover08
    February 6, 2007

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    That was so gracefull and touching, you have a great mind of creating poetry well done indeed, good luck in my contest

  • Cat -lover08
    February 6, 2007
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    Lovey!!!!


  • April 25, 2006
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    Such a beautiful write you have here. Only thing is you forgot to follow the rules. Good luck.
    Shining-star
    Edited on Apr 25, 6:44 p.m. because ''.


  • February 28, 2005
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    Since the number of Outcast: Roses, they have gotten a whole different meaning to me, but roses have so many meanings and for every person they have a personal place in their life (or no place that is an option) Anyway thanks for entering my contest and good luck. Cevanme Nimue


  • PrincessOfFire
    July 18, 2004
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    Very nice, a reminder of the days we use roses to show love. Good luck in the contest. God bless you.
    Rose


  • July 17, 2004
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    One cannot say enough about my favorite flower, I adore this so much. I like your style. You show such amazing talent. Take care, Lissa

  • l-u-b-y-l-o-o
    July 5, 2004
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    hey! this is a really nice poem! i love roses! they can serve so many purposes! great write! well done! thanks for entering my contest and good luck! love lulu xxx


  • PrincessOfFire
    July 2, 2004
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    I would love to see the punctuation corrected. Makes for better reading. The yellow rose is my favorite along with the peach. I grow huge yellow roses, because they attact butterflies.
    Gop bless you.
    Rose


  • xShadowedxAngelx
    March 29, 2004
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    I loved this poem because i love roses and i also love the form i agree with hoosierpoet it is a good way to present a rose as a special occasion flower Great Write and Good Luck!! Jacqui


  • Hoosierpoet silver member
    March 22, 2004
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    Very well written, and beautiful perfect form. A good way to present this "special occasion" flower. Thanks for entering the contest.

    Best wishes,
    Moses


  • poetryality silver member
    March 19, 2004
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    I love roses, especially yellow roses. This is very beautiful, as is the rose.

    Much Love,
    Renee

  • PoetryGirl26
    November 20, 2003
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    Roses...my second favorite flower...very good write, i love these different poem types that i just can't seem to fathom..good work here!

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