You broke my heart....You ripped it in half....
And now you expect me to love you,
Again...But...
....I want to say goodbye,
Say goodbye...
.....hope it makes you cry.Say goodbye....
....you made me so why not,
You'll never understand the hell you put me through...say goodbye and never ever come back to say hi.
Author notes
I am sorry two lines over
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This is very sad and very expressive. I especially liked the last line, it gives you power, very nice
I think if you reformatted this you could get it to 10 lines 
I gave one extra day for people to make changes if they wished to I used to use the ... method myself quite a bit but I think you might have overused it here. That process for most is used as a thought continuation process at the end of a line and them possibly drop the line down one by leaving a space and I say 10 lines only but that means actual text, I do allow line spaces thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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Wow a very emotional write. I can feel your hurt and anger. I don't blame you. Sometimes they hurt us and then come back not realizing the pain we feel deep inside. Its so hard to trust again. A terrific poem. Take care, Sandy
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