It was like
a look reflected
with no meaty bones.
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10 words
A contest entry
- 10 words ..... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended February 12, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest
Comments
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This does get the mind roaming. I'm familiar with the word schlock, so no biggie there. I do like that this piece can allow the reader to interpret it as they wish, it makes it a vast comparison. Nicely done.
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This is certainly creative and immensely thought provoking... x
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wow your words are so amazing anf stunning and realy add effect. so deep well done and best of luck to you
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