Don't spoil what we have
by saying,
"I love you."
Author notes
Prompt, is copycat, meaning, "don't portray what you perceive me doing."
A contest entry
- 10 words ..... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended February 12, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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powerfull.
but i reallllllllllllllllllly disagree with the message
good tho
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"Dpn't spoil what we have by saying I love you"
Such a sad thing to think about, but yet i'm sure many could realte to words so small, short,and genuine. It's a great piece... -
ha you got that down pat! ADVICE WELL WOORTHY OF THE THROPHY
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What a fabulous and very different take on the prompt... x
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oops, that is a tall order when one has those thoughts,lol good luck in this contest...MOONS
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