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The Romance Butterfly

I believe in butterflies
and… and… escape
I believe in romance
because heartbreak Lives and Breathes

and after all, what is a life
with no beginning?
what Lives and Breathes,
without a Heart to Start?

what is the Start?
when it all Began?

I believe in many things
if I close my eyes….

if I close my eyes
I wish for the End of Time
what is the End?
it is when
I don’t have to Grow Up

I don’t want to Grow Up
I don’t want the End
the Don’t Wants are inevitable
the Wants are only possible
and the Forced Things…

they only make us Dream.

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i'm ultimate beluga, ill appreciate any comments but don't feel you have to!
soo yeah, this is pretty much just random thoughtsy bits. it just came out.

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  • Edna Sweetlove
    March 30, 2008

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    I found the random use of Capital Letters with No particular Aim in mind, slightly Annoying, I have to Say. See what I meaN?


  • fantasysmurf
    March 15, 2008

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    Thats usually the best...

    When stuff comes out without you having to hardly think about it, it is usually the best. Because it is original, raw and real. Do more of this, and you will have no problem touching people's minds.
    My favourite lines are:
    "I wish for the End of Time
    what is the End?
    it is when
    I don’t have to Grow Up"