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An angel's embrace...

Missing image
Turtle dove kisses
upon hushed cheeks
as tiny fingers
curl beneath lullabies

touching mother's heart
reminding her of sunshine
and forever after love ~

she turns
and breathes him in

asleep

softly in dreams...

A contest entry

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 11, 2008

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    This is so utterly beautiful it touches deep in my heart.
    I lost my son five years ago but it is still fresh in my mind, this write reminds me of him All in a good way

    .♥.
    Thank you for your entry
    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    awwww this is such a beautiful piece and your wording holds so much within it. a beautiful flowing piece. best of luck


  • BellaD
    February 10, 2008
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    Beautiful poem!

    This is well written, flows smoothly, a delight to read.