i do give a damn
im not a fool for loving you
thats who I AM
venus and mars its true
dont come back
because i expect it
this means you lack
the love to direct it
suculent succubi
i will torment
for you wont have an alibi
to resist this moment
suffering affliction
might in kind
you are the one with addiction
not in my mind
i believe you, trust you i do
we have a sanctuary
but ultimately im misleading you
into next february
you cant find the essence
of what cannot be found
emotion from an empty heart
will just lead you round and round
do not mistake me
for you think i care
you hardly see
all you will feel is despair
you are the death adder
snakes are short yet can easily be tamed
if that is your love it does not matter
lies and deception are easily chained
i crumble inside yes i do
but its not for you im in pain
my mind terrorises true
hardships of life in the fast lane
i have a burning desire for love
yet there is no fire
this love sets me free as a dove
no higher liar
what im trying to say is you try to crush me
but of all the fantasy you think you will succeed
you are mistaken for i will evoke amnesty
you cant succeed for it is too late, i leave my deed
this is my confession
you will all suffer this fate
evil will devour vision
and love will succumb to hate
A contest entry
- Anything You Want :: Celebrating my 100 Trophies by Manda Kathryn.
900 points, ended February 13, 2008, 45 entries
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Comments
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hmm another poem that reminds me of a song, but I can't quite put my finger on which song. Anyway, I like this. It makes me feel sad that the person you care for can't understand your feelings, but I know how that was as well. I like the way you are proud at admitting how you feel and that it's just the way you feel and that's that.
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G'Day Jezz
Wow. Strongly expressed; sad and painful kinda makes you take a different view on love in a way ...
Love it
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Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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