I don't want to be angry anymore
I cant find the answers they are running so thin
I cant even find a place to begin
what can you say when someone is lost
all you can see is a shade of their ghost
when do you feel enough is enough
when all you get told is to try and be tough
how do you say i really care
when all they will say im ripping out my hair
why do you say there are no answers
when you haven't looked, and become your own cancer
mind your own business, i will do as i like
ill run away, thats right ill go take a hike
for i cant stand this tension
apart from that there is not much to mention
there is more to me than meets eye
but for you to learn, you must but try
for there is nothing without an effort
that can have a great comfort
for there is no sadness with no rain
and no happiness without a bit of pain
In a list
A contest entry
- Anything You Want :: Celebrating my 100 Trophies by Manda Kathryn.
900 points, ended February 13, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *** UNCOVER MY FEELINGS *** by Rebekah-Ann.
500 points, ended April 2, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
who do you want to be for other people? and should you have to be something for others?
Comments
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thanks so much for your entry!! I connected to this poem and the part that grabbed at me best was "but for you to learn, you must but try for there is nothing without an effort"
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G'Day Jezz
I really enjoyed your final three lines; they sink in deep and bring a burst of flavor to the poem
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Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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hey! i loved it.. I can so much relate to it, I also liked the rhyme, it's very well written.
keep the good work and thanks for sharing
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