She's been crying again
Clear streams are bleeding
Running down those flushed cheeks
Broken are her sacred dreams
Nothing is left to live for
She's been crying again
Puddles of clear blood appear
Flash flooding of sorrows predicted
No one notices she is drowning
She fades away to nothing
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She always cried
Tears streamed down her face
I didnt know how to help her
I was scared to say anything
I knew but I let her fade away
A contest entry
- Anything You Want :: Celebrating my 100 Trophies by Manda Kathryn.
900 points, ended February 13, 2008, 45 entries
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Comments
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G'Day Nikki

Wow! This is ... shokcingly sad and brutal
Makes me want to cry as it seems to be you are talking about yourself but it also seems like you are talking about anything person, a close friend
Powerfully penned.
.♥.
Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda

