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Floods of Guilt

She's been crying again
Clear streams are bleeding
Running down those flushed cheeks
Broken are her sacred dreams
Nothing is left to live for

She's been crying again
Puddles of clear blood appear
Flash flooding of sorrows predicted
No one notices she is drowning
She fades away to nothing

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She always cried
Tears streamed down her face
I didnt know how to help her
I was scared to say anything
I knew but I let her fade away

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 11, 2008
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    G'Day Nikki

    Wow! This is ... shokcingly sad and brutal
    Makes me want to cry as it seems to be you are talking about yourself but it also seems like you are talking about anything person, a close friend

    Powerfully penned.
    .♥.
    Thank you for your entry
    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda