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What's in Your Heart

Today's a day that flowers bloom
Getting rid of Winter's gloom.
Sharing gifts with our love
To our soulmates from above.
Our feelings etched in rings and stone
Hearts on our sleeve, proudly shown.
Hearts everywhere, in pink and red
Love's bursting, with nothing said.
Let love rain down and your eyes say
What's in your heart, Valentine's Day.

Author notes

Option #1- my quote
"Let love rain down and your eyes say
What's in your heart, Valentine's Day"

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  • wakingdevil
    February 14, 2008

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    Wonderful write, I can see why it won the silver, very well expressed with some good rhyming.
    Also, thanks alot for the membership...I'm feeling bad for I don't think that I deserve it at all....Good luck


  • paullallady silver member
    February 10, 2008

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    A very sweet poem of love. I liked the
    rythm and flow of this. And it is perfect
    for Valentines day. Good luck in the
    contest.

  • Girlinthewild
    February 10, 2008

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    Very cute! This poem made me smile because it made me think of my special someone (and he always makes me smile!). I thought the flow was very nice and it was short and sweet! GOod job!