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Inside My Valentine

If there's one thing you can take away
Something you should know everyday
It's that you mean everything to me
Like no one else could ever be

Even when I feel alone
I know you're always at the end of my phone
And if I need to, you'll talk all night
Because you can always make everything right

You make me smile and laugh and cry
And I can get lost in your eyes
You're the one thing I can't stand to lose
You're my life, my world, my everything, and I love you


09 February 2008
8:28pm

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  • N e a r
    February 16, 2008

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    You are very strong with your feelings, and you know what you feel is true. Heartfelt and very simply put, yet what you say is what touches your heart to the deepest of points... Love. Truly amazing when it comes in forms like this. Your poetry is gorgeously written.
    ~

    Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • mAgAn1888
    February 12, 2008
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    awwww
    i so totaly love this poem
    it desrribes wat i do.


  • Melodies
    February 11, 2008

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    Well yes, most certainly a beautiful poem expressing love... and I hope you print this lovely valentine out and give it to a special someone.


    • Manda-Lou
      February 11, 2008
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      Thank you!
      I actually wrote this specifically to put in my boyfriend's valentine I made him out of felt sticker hearts, construction paper and glitter

  • Liquid memories
    February 10, 2008
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    loved the flow and feeling here.


  • paullallady silver member
    February 10, 2008

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    What a wonderful and romantic poem of
    love for that special valentine. It is
    very emotional and sweet and tender.
    good luck in the contest.

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