If only I could stop the world
and get up off this track
I would press the rewind button
so that I could go back
to a time and to a place
where we first fell in love
when you captured my heart
and before we fell apart
Then I'd press the forward button
and hold onto you tight
our memories would be together
and everything alright
Our children would be grown
and our golden years be known
if only I could stop the world
and make our love our own.
Author notes
Definitely Option #5
Recently published.
A contest entry
- Options for the Heartbroken by ThatONEweirdChick.
625 points, ended March 9, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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such a sweet caring write. many of us wish we could turn back time and have another chance, but alas it is in vain, gone never to return. important to use our days wisely, for each one gives us less chance to find happiness, and love. success in the contest. well done.
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Nice. Wow. I really like this one. I'm not sure which option it is so could you please edit that into your notes? Sometimes it seems so easy to spot mistakes from the past because hind sight is always 20-20. If only out efforts were enough to save something that required both parties help. Just great job with this one.
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Thank you
I will edit in the option.
I am glad you liked it. I guess with valentines day around the corner, it makes us think about lost loves. Especially your first!
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