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Alone

Her damaged heart aches-
The grumbles of hunger
Emanate in every beat.
The masses pass her by,
Too busy to feed a word
Or a smile
To the hollow girl,
Crippled by starvation.
Chaos echoes around her-
A constant reminder
That she is alone.

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    February 10, 2008

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    Such sadness in these words, but so true, you have written this very well

    Thanks for entering this contest, best of luck

    Karen