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If You Wish It

Well, here you are
New in the world
My dearest little friend

I would tell you it's wonderful
At least, that's
What they say

I wouldn't know
I'm new here too
Just not as new as you

My dear, this is a pretty place
Where you can be
Loved

You are so small, and yet
So big
You will fill up our hearts

I know you can't truly
Understand
But dearest, hear me out...

I'm here to give you
All my love
Because it is my job

It's the one thing you will
Always have
No matter what, my dear

And can I tell you
My best learned
Secret?

If you wish it, little love
This world
Can be all yours.

Author notes

Picture inspired, a little girl's whispered words to her brand new baby brother. Congratulations Poetic Whisperer. Hope you enjoyed my piece!
~Cj

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    February 15, 2008

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    This is beautiful, thank you so much for entering something so beautiful... I love it

    Thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you every luck

    Karen


  • Dlvvanzor
    February 10, 2008

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    That's beautiful *sniff* Great write...

    *sniffle*

    Especially the line about being new to the world herself.

    Great one.
    -Dlvvanzor


  • Decorus Somnium
    February 10, 2008

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    Ohh what a cute poem. It's full of innocence and happiness. I love it! Wish you all the best in the contest.
    Keep writing