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WaLK WiTH mE

He knew I was confused
With my situation
And offered His hand
"Walk with me," He said.

He knew I was hurting
From so many deaths
He offered me His hand
"Walk with me," He said.

He knew I had stumbled
Many times through the journey
Still He offered His hand
"Walk with me," He said.

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  • Puppydog gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    WONDERFUL!!!!!

    When one offers a helping hand without reservations they are indeed a true and sincere friend.


  • ButterflyforChrist
    February 14, 2008

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    I agree with Liz. The first thing that came to mind when reading this was the poem Footprints in the Sand. THis is gorgeous. What a beautiful poem. Very inspirational


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    February 13, 2008

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    This beautiful poem reminded me of "Footprints in the Sand":

    “You promised me Lord,
    that if I followed you, you would walk with me always. But I have noticed that during the most trying periods of my life there has only been one set of footprints in the sand. Why, when I needed you most, have you not been there for me?”

    The Lord replied, “The years when you have seen only one set of footprints, my child, is when I carried you.”

    Welcome to our titles group. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Peace, Liz


    • GentleStorm
      February 14, 2008
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      yes, and it is one of the most inspirational poems of my life.


  • WingedWolf
    February 10, 2008

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    God certainly is the wonderful Father. This piece is very touching. "Walk with me," He said. He certainly knows how to make us feel wanted and loved. I love God. I love this poem. Great job with the title choice.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    February 10, 2008

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    Comforting to have somebody offering his/her hand just when you seem to need it....

    Beautyful write.
    XXJeannette


  • paullallady silver member
    February 9, 2008

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    Oh my, this is so very touching
    and sweet and very tender. I
    know who I think He is, but I
    wonder if that is who you meant.
    hmmmm? I really enjoyed the whole
    feel of this one.


  • sunny day
    February 9, 2008

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    And He said walk with me, when your journey is too hard to bear I will help you through. What lovely thoughts you have taken for this title. I am left feeling peaceful and humbled in His presence. Thank you for sharing your gift with us here. Love and God bless, Joyce

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