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My Shrinking Universe

'round and 'round
 cycling deeper
searching for lables,
 those ego peepers
that lend defenition
 to what we feel,
denied,defied but
 all to real.

trust me
 says he, i'm
your secerets keeper.
i 'm broke
i confess, can
 you make your
rates cheaper?

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My brother, a psycologist, tells me that many in this field have difficulty dealing with money, so I kid.

do you see the joke?

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  • james119
    April 13, 2008
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    this is a hoot :)

    This fellow probably regrets "cycling deeper" on that occasion: great humour, flow and meter. I like the brevity too.


  • lalainya rising
    February 21, 2008
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    This really made me smile dear. Doctors cost to much!


  • Zahhar gold member
    February 12, 2008
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    i wonder what it would be about the field of psychology that would draw people to it who have difficulty dealing with money. and dealing with in what way? holding onto it? feeling guilty about it? something else?

    i'm no fan of psychology, or psychiatry. i feel that both fields are purely make believe, and of no value to humanity. i'd sooner put my emotional care in the hands of a witch doctor, or shaman, or television evangelist. and they all charge less.


  • George Bowling
    February 9, 2008

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    haha! a somewhat misguided view of the world of psychological analysis put together in lucid and scathing prose. a nice write, pleasure to read.