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levantil pariundra

comen quali tunkra de
shalen moka pula ge
levan fombri cuma ki
hundra lepal stepa fi

dima telvo shipal drek
fula mashen lenka fek
berla efu genda cle
kumpra lagen yu jue

gomen falla suma peg
lista shomen puma steg
grupa runte bomer sel
frume lapen konte grel

aben felpa muka drep
lerde munsta kumpa iliep
wuni monka fara unka lec
sledra umin balen vek

neku tori quisha tro
tuli balen uma huro

yeri bunda
meri jumda
wepel comi
gepal bundi


sharo tumo falldren geri

gumo bashen theru beli


TRANSLATION:

where my loved ones take their rest
there i shall lay my hallow breast
in time we found a sacred place
consecrated by her holy face

 

she rose for us when we came

calling all founders by their name

before again she laid to sleep

our duties were given we to keep

 

this place we took and then transformed

into a shrine of worship bourne

on mind and spirit of all devoted 

true believers and those eroded

 

the time came to bid him come

after her will had been done 

we sanctified our temples in his gaze

he guided us with his truthful praise

 

our city again leave only unto us

to no one who will break the trust

 

time taken

mind broken

body tamed

life reframed

 

we took the oath and burned in deep

the living trust we promise to keep 

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  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    February 10, 2008

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    I was a little confused by the um, words in the beginning. But after I read the translation, I just like fell in love with the poem. My God do I love it. I'm making it a bookmark


  • Red widow
    February 10, 2008

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    wonderful poem and nicely written i also appreciate the translation. But it isnt exactly describing to me your version of paradise. thank you for entering


    • hypnorocker
      February 10, 2008
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      oh.. sorry, i tried to stick to explaining but i guess if it doesn't make sense thats ok... sorry, i'll try better next time...