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Angelic V (Sonnet #67)

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Is this an angel caught in spotlight’s glare,

A tiger cat clutched gently to her breast?

Has ever God created one so fair

As she who time and heav’n have greatly blessed?

Humility abounds, angelic bliss,

A peaceful aura there her soul ordains.

Tranquility surrounds, a genesis

Of life that naught can alter or constrain.

And yet beneath that sweet seraphic face

Doth lurk a vital maiden full of life,

That rings of endless joy and boundless grace,

Devoid of enmity and foolish strife.

Angelic is this face that touches all,

Ensuring her that nothing can enthrall.

Author notes

Saw this photo and couldn't keep from writing. It just touched me no end - couldn't forget it once I saw it the first time. Just something very special.

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  • Veronica Leigh
    February 12, 2008

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

    This is so beautiful! I feel so unworthy!!! I wasn't expecting this and it was such a nice surprise to have read this today. I LOVE this. Really, I think this is my favorite. You are wonderful and I love you!!!

    P.S. Thank you!

  • FordGirl
    February 11, 2008
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    Very pretty , I liked it. You put a lot into this.


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    February 11, 2008

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    This is such an eloquent and breathtaking write. You never cease to amaze me dear friend. I am gled that I read it.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    February 11, 2008

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    Wonderful flow, rhythm and rhyme in this sonnet. Lovely picture it is, as cats are some of some children's, and adults too, best friends in time of sorrow, sadness and sickness. Lovely thoughts and sentiments shared in these lines.

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  • starting.over gold member
    February 11, 2008

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    its so beautiful! oh my! the picture is in such sync with the poem they are just perfect! you should be very very VERY pleased with this piece! wonderful write
  • Liquid memories
    February 11, 2008

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    nicely done of picture, what came to your mind. ShakesP, would be proud, if he did not have too much of the grapes. much of his writings are felt, but the language, though well used in his day are archaic today, the real meanings lost through time. many derivation appears, truth lost in revisions and expressions ion todays lingos. thank you for sharing, made my day.

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  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    February 11, 2008

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    this is a VERY FINE WRITE! YOU SHOULD BE VERY PLEASED WITH THIS! afine ending couplet thanks for sharing regards zaj

  • Ishtar
    February 10, 2008

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    That photo is very touching. It looks so serene and the poem compliments the mood that picture evokes perfectly.
    Yet, there's also something sad about that picture, too.


    Anyways, stop being so amazing! ;p << that would be the msn tongue dude. Tehee

    -Reni


  • OurGoldenYears Page gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    I can understand why this picture seemed special, children are very unique in their own way, to write this form as you did, it took a special person to do so, good luck in this contest...
    Moons


  • Ryno
    February 10, 2008
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    This is beautiful and worded so well, I truly enjoyed this one.

    Thank-you so much for the entry.

  • Moons Lunar Angel
    February 9, 2008
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    This is so beautiful gramps. Such a heavenly piece.
    Lil
    Love ya

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