cryptic secrets in the depths of my mind
veiled from the relentless world
santic cravings that bind
the razor to my trembling hand
life has paid its deathly toll
hell had taken my scarred soul
pain is what i was born to feel
these violent conquests
that my heart cannot conseal
the tip of the jagged edge
penetrates the flesh of my wrist
no regrets
no false threats
just tears, blood, screams and pain
i am no longer part of this cruel game
as my vision fades
and my dark heart slows
i write a note in my own blood
struggling to stay alive
i consider what to say
to the ones who induced me
to feel this way?
no one cared
no one tried
so who should care if i die?
no one to trust
no family
no friends
its not like your going to care
if my life ends
so this is for the ones
who put me through strife
and compelled me to have an empty life
im already gone
its time to sell
my soul to the devil in the depths of hell
i place a note on my chest
as i can hear my very last breath
after years of fighting
i finally surrender
to death
A contest entry
- EMO POETS!!! by black hearted rebel.
300 points, ended February 10, 2008, 5 entries
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1090 points, ended March 6, 2008, 45 entries
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1400 points, ended February 23, 2008, 29 entries
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Comments
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great description! one can easily feel your pain through this poem. good job! keep it up...
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My only question is why does everyone mention a razor, NEWAY Excellent rhyme scheme, oh wow, this is dark, you really dug deep into the emotion. You really had great imagery, I could feel your pain. Excellent job and good luck in the contest. JUST WOW
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A powerful and intense piece. I like it. Good luck in the contest with it
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nice job
This is really good. its very powerful and it flows amazingly!
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amazing really well done
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Great Job! Love IT!
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wow
Very powerful write!
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wow
great write
I love it!!
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