A new morning, different day
Do I still feel the same?
Do we visit the past or keep our eyes to the future?
If we choose the past, what then happens to our future?
Is there room for growth and improvement or do we become prisoners of our memories?
When looking to the future will our past haunt us with every step we take?
Will things never be the same again?
Perhaps for the better and also for worse all at once
When this happens, will our hearts break from the struggle resulting in tearing our whole world apart?
Is there any recovering from that kind of pain?
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great write, i love how you question throughout it, really gives emphasis to the pain and emotion behind your words.
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Great write. The pain does go away. Look towards the future and see what can happen. Keep up the great work.
-don't worry, be happy for life is too short-
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great
Great!!!
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very nice. I actually pondering almost the same thing in recent days. The questions asked really make you ponder. I liked it.
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The simple questions needing the right answers which are impossible to find:
mind boggling, indeed.
Beautiful lines you've written here
to make the reader wonder in question
and at the same time in awe =]
all in all, i quite like this, all right ^^
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very good
Great mix of emotion. Really truthful and i think that u maybe have inspired me just a little like everyone else does!!! I especially loved the questions!! -
like ill say again at looking at it a second time it looks good!! Hasnt made me any less liking it!! I think this is the kind where u could really get lost in after a while.
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Love this poem it is a really good write and good questions in it.
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I like the thought process here and you brought up some insightful questions. Thanks for sharing!
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i think that sooner or later everyone world feels like it is getting torn apart, be it death, a lost love, or a friendship gone bad it all hurts at some point even years later ... ... great poem i loved it... ...
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It's interesting! I like all the questions! great job.
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Perhaps for the better and also for worse all at once
When this happens, will our hearts break from the struggle resulting in tearing our whole world apart?
Is there any recovering from that kind of pain?
Those last few lines were powerfully strong. I enjoyed this piece, and the questions throughout. There seems to be only two choices--to live for the future, or to live in the past, though personally I believe that there should be some balance struck between the two.
Questions that spark the mind of the reader. Great job.
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