I promise to be there when you need me,
fill your days with sushine,
be there to comfort you,
and encourge you.
I promise to wipe away your tears,
and I promise to get rid of your pain with my caring ways,
and compassion.
Whatever lies ahead good or bad we will face together.
I give myself to you completely,
and I ask you to share this world with me.
I'll love you with my whole life
and with all of my heart.
Forever and always.
Author notes
This is wat i would say if i was actually getting married and if i was with someone.
A contest entry
- Wedding Vows. by Expression.
525 points, ended February 14, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What Do u think?
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what a lovely piece.
it is a rare thing top find a love so strong that you would give him/her everything.
i love the way you've written this.
it is not perfectly structured or anything,
and i think that fits the message.
excellent job.
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i realy realy love this poem ur a really go poet
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I hope that one day you find the right person to marry because I am sure that you can take someones heart away with these awesome words.
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What a sweet and tender poem this is. These
would be wonderful vows and I am sure
anyone would love to hear these words from
the one they love. -
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thank you
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