allen touches me from beyond the grave,
he penetrates my ego,
going deeper and deeper,
getting to the raw art of me...
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i've been reading the journals of allen ginsberg.
what do YOU think?
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ok kinda spooky but nice.
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very deep
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mother fucking sexy as anything i've ever read. and it's inspired from allen ginsberg!! i knew you were The Shit.
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very nice
lots of feeling...love it. Just what a person that writes poems need...put some feeling into it.
so way to go and keep up the GREAT work!
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deeply touching
well written and deeply touching
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Wow, such a powerful way with words that is short and to the point. Great job
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thanks sunflower and stone wolf!
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Ah yes...the beat of all beats! You've got his tones. Like what he's doing to your muse, only requires a few tastes of the 'ginsberg'.
This is my first visit to your pages poet. I too am impressed.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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awesome
yes. this is the first taste of him i have had, reading his journals of younger years...i plan on starting a contest in the relatively near future pertaining ot the beat generation...i hope you enter!
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Do continue!!
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thanks
though i'm not sure i want to continue...turn it to shit and what not...it wouldn't be fair to allen -
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*HUG*
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