Petals slowly unfold to welcome the sun
after long cold and dark winter days
Stretching out velvety arms
towards the warmth of the light casting rays
Opening up with vibrancy and life
emitting sweet fragrance on the breeze
Appealing to all the senses at once
with an ambiance that certainly does please
This beauty is shared for all to see
filling hearts with happiness
Creating sensations as sweetly as
a soft, yet a passionate caress
In a list
A contest entry
- Valentines Day Contest, Win A Gold Membership! by Kari.
900 points, ended February 12, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hood-Winked!
Congratulations on the honorable mention, it was well deserved with this piece
... the last stanza is my favorite, it is so beautiful... the rhyme is subtle and not horribly forced, the flowery imagery is wonderfully done
Keep writing
Polly
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You have one amazing border background here hun just supports you words to perfection.
Beautifully penned your lines are touched with love. Very nicely crafted... good luck in the contest.
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very delicate. Lovely background. Wonderful imagery capture here to invite all to the beauty of love.
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Beautiful imagery painted in this poem. I love the metaphor in the first verse. Lovely border and background also!
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This is just beautiful hun, so soft and gentle and the background is incredible as always.... a beautiful picture you paint with your words, goodluck in this contest
Karen
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