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Tourniquet


Screaming to the deep, dark night. Waiting to die from the loneliness. I need you, want you to hold me tight, never let go. I’m bleeding, waiting for you to rescue me from myself.

Love me, don’t let me fall. Don’t let me become a nothingness. I can’t scream, my voice has gone hoarse. My every tears run dry when I realize no one is coming for me. I’ve been left behind!


(Chorus)
I’m bleeding, just to bleed, knowing no one cares. I’m screaming, but it’s silent, cause no one cares. I’m falling, far from you, never to live, never to love.

Can’t anyone hear me? Do you? Can someone save me, or love me, yeah~.
Do you care, do you want to know my pain? My blood runs dry, and I’m still alive.

What kind of cruel world is this to let me cry?
The stars are dancing points of light, but it’s all there is.


(Chorus 2x)
I’m bleeding, just to bleed, knowing no one cares. I’m

Screaming, but it’s silent, cause no one cares. I’m falling, far
From you, never to live, never to love.

Oh God, be my salvation!
You my love, help me, be my tourniquet. Isn’t anyone missing me? Do you remember me?

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  • I saw this title on your author page and had to read it. I think you did a fantastic job creating your own lyrics to this. I know, that Evanescence was not the first to use this title, but they are my favorite band and a huge inspiration for me poeticly (I have a rather large list of poems inspired by their music )
    Anyway, I would love to read more of your writes. I like what I read thus far.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • x-Wilted Rose-x
    July 31, 2008
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    Love this song!

    Great write. i really love it.i feel like i can relate to it,and i love that


  • Amethyst jean
    May 22, 2008
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    Oh P.S i'm like a huge fan of Evanescence tooo!!


  • Amethyst jean
    May 22, 2008
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    I CAN RELATE TO THIS.

    I really like this, i can most definitely relate to this!!!!!!! Great job!


  • This Is My Story
    May 18, 2008
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    I love tgar song! This is really good!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 27, 2008
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    A powerful piece, so full of longing. Superbly penned


  • Maybe.I.Am.Broken.
    March 2, 2008
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    Love this song...
    Beautiful rewrite...


  • Robert Rumery
    February 23, 2008
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    Isn't that an Evanscene song title? lol


    • Snow White Queen
      February 24, 2008
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      theres a bunch of bands that use this title...Like I told my sister...Evanescence didnt make it up...


  • bar room stool
    February 11, 2008
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    amazing

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