Escape from my soul
Resting on shores of dignity
Release me from your bind
Rest on my shoulder
Let your head sink in
Bliss for a moment
Unknown feelings
Thrown to my inside
Denying an irritating truth
Let me only fly
For now is my chance
Looking for softer ground
A contest entry
- Give me your best by xorandomxo.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Holding Your Hand [♥] ....Options! by Breathless Ballons.
375 points, ended June 13, 2008, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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great, i loved this.
thanks for entering & good luck -
great title
You have found a very interesting title.
The poem works quite well in a generic kind of way, as it could be about anyone. It doesn't have the personal kind of details that make a poem sing, but it does show a certain amount of talent in the use of language.
pretty sweet!
have a gr8 day,
BJ.
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this was a very good write.
love the background.
thanks for entering.
good luck.
unbreakable♥
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