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Close Enough

There are days that I just want to sit here and cry
To look into your eyes
So you can feel what I feel when I think of you

When I'm not beside you it is hard to tell you
Through words what I feel
But you know my heart is what I give you

The times that I am with you I cannot explain
How I can know
You and I are the most special I have ever had

How often I feel when we hug and embrace
My face to your face
I cannot get close enough to you

I want your soul to envelop mine everytime you are near
All I want to hear
Our two hearts syncronized and beating

You are the one to keep me in high extacy of life
Feeling more than I ever have felt
My first and truest love of my life


9 February 2008
6:06pm

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For options contest : http://allpoetry.com/contest/2432585 Option 3 "Brandy -- Have You Ever"

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  • Princess Cuddle Bug
    January 21

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    this is awsome huni! lots of emotion!

    thanks for entering and good luck,
    ~*Princess Cuddle Bug*~


  • N e a r
    February 16, 2008

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    This poem sounds like you are struggling to find the right words to say... It is really difficult, especially since you feel the desire and need to do so... Expressing yourself is hard at times, and this emotion is one of those that is hard to capture with words. You did a great job with this write. Magnificent lines and loving detail.
    ~

    Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • Ryno
    February 10, 2008

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    Quite a touching one & the emotions are luring for the poem. Interesting.

    Thank-you for the entry.


  • eternitydemon
    February 9, 2008
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    OMG! LOVE IT!!

    I am going to send this to my boyfreind (copyrights wont be forgotten)

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