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fears of falling

at first i was scared
so afraid to fall
didnt want to be hurt
so i refused it all
and told you no
though i had really meant yes

you kept trying
dispite my replies
then fear subsided
when i finally looked into  your eyes

i fell hard
though fear wasnt on my mind
for you fell with me
in cupids design

Author notes

it was quite difficult not putting love into this
but it was fun working with the word play
to incinuate it

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