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Falter

My darling, I hear you
Your heart's deepest cry
And like an echo calling back to you
My heart has the same cry

The waters are troubled
They ripple & cause waves
They seem to push us apart
And I hate these waves

Must there be such distance?
Such space between hearts
Must there be such a longing?
No longer must we be apart

I need such words of love
Such pain from being apart
I hate sitting & waiting
I love you from my heart

Author notes

Just a little thing before I go off.

Well....suppose you can give me something to work with?

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    Nice job Jess this was good. You haven't posted a poem on here for a while I was surprised. Anyway excellent work



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