sunshine fondel day
swept up a gush wind blew in
a feather tickle
A contest entry
- Weekend Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended February 11, 2008, 19 entries
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I Like It
This is a very unusual poem but a very well penned poem too. its very different and odd in its own way but I really enjoyed the unique foreplay through out this and your humor was a bit off center but very well done too. any ways really enjoyed the way you posted this poem as your words flow smoothly and your lines were quite well done. any ways keep up the good work
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Thank u
Thank u for the wonderful sentimentst given to my ku. I'm glad u got amused that put a smile lol. Saddie23
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I don`t know very much about haiku but i like this piece
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Thank u
Thank u for the applaudes and the wonderful sentiments given to my ku. Saddie23
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sunshine fundle day
swept up a gush wind blew in
a feather tickle
This is an interesting haiku, may I ask for a definition of "fundle," I cannot find it in the dictionary. (or if it means something modern, it shows my age!) Thank you so much.
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thank u
Thank u for the wonderful critique. I spelled fundel wrong, just a typo. Its spelled "fondel"- which means brushed against. Thank u for the applaudes too. Saddie23
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what a wonderful haiku! The imagery and the
sensations that this evokes are terrific.
good job on this one.
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Thank u
Thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my ku. Sorry about the typo. Saddie23
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