Roses are Red
Violets are blue
This is why I love you
I love the way you smile
I love the way you laugh
And when you tickle me
when I'm sad
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It's cliche, but it is a nice effort! Perhaps you could improve this by showing us how and why the speaker loves the person he/she addresses; poetic devices are indeed lovely! Simply telling us things usually is not effective.
Here's a good reference:
http://highered.mcgraw-hill.com/sites/0072405228/student_view0/poetic_glossary.html
Oh, & keep writing!
hiraeth. -
no you really didnt help we wrote it all by ourselves
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