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I am Deep

I am deep beacuse ....

let's be honest
let's be true
let's be real
i am deep because
well in honesty i feel

i feel your happiness when you're not grinning
when your not jumping laughing or spinning

i feel your tears when they don't fall
i can feel your heart most of all

i can feel the rips, scratches and aches
i can feel that thing that the world wants to take

i can feel your spirit
when you say hello
and feel your soul
when you say goodbye
i can feel it all
it's in your eyes

when you look at me don't say a word
just trust that, it's been heard

when you want to scream, and you want to yell
fall into my arms, I'll never tell

i'll hold you near
and tell you true
"Honey you need to face the problems
that face you"

let it out annd let them know
that in this world you have something to show



i am deep
because in my soul
theirs happiness
i am deep because
in my mind there's no fear
i am deep because
when you wanted to take my heart
i didn't just stand there

i became an emblem of happiness
of joy and of hope
i became the emblem of learning to live, and learning to cope

i was.
deep.
when i didnt let the pain
seep
into my soul
i am.
deep.
because i took that leap
and paid that toll
i will forever be
deep
and forever reap
in what no creep has stole

and that is me.





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Do you have someone in life who is "deep" like that?

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    Beautiful! I've known deep people on this site and also my real life brother. He's very deep. Anyway nicely written. Thanks for entering. Good luck to you. Brian

  • Sunshine Princess
    February 9, 2008

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    I really like your poem being you is the best that you can be good luck to you in this contest have a nice day love Genna