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Reflective Beauty

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garden jewel
the sweetheart hovers elegantly
for delightful poetic sips

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    February 22, 2008

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    The title , perfect and allready provoking such thought in me :) delightful poetic sips..mmmm yummy but amzingly good words to end the piece with :):) *rose* Cindy


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 9, 2008
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    Beautifully vivid.... x Thank you... x

  • davidwright silver member
    February 9, 2008
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    Great write - is it another Haiku. David


  • malmadre gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    We are indeed creatures that live on the nectar of sweet rhyme, flitting from one flowery verse to another. I like the taste of this one!