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Smile As Cradled April Moon

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Rush my soul through tempering wilderness,

canyon's sandstone collective
quivering space in open fissure,
these walls of grace, echoing space in lacy diorama.

I am breath to fill your secret’s hollow in rainbow's wonder,
rushing Colorado splash, as fragrant freedom’s liquid wonderland.


And when we speak in swirling tongue,
this blush of nature, finding middle,

I hope you smile as cradled, April moon,
melting more than yesterday's snowstorm.

















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  • The Slant
    February 26, 2008

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    this is beautiful. great word choice, very well written. it is obviously personal. i'm uncertain about the picture, but overall i really enjoyed this poem. not much critique.


  • Frozentearz
    February 10, 2008

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    I seem to be visiting your page a lot these days
    once again congratulations on your award,
    Warm thoughts and once again a joy to visit your page.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • Night Hope gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    "these walls of grace, echoing space in lacy diorama."

    Ahhh, how I love your words, your elegant use of metaphor, my Friend. Good luck in Lynda's contest, dear Scribe of such sweet & soothing sighs. Wanda


  • Three Doves
    February 9, 2008

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    Perfect write! "I am breath to fill your secret's hollow in rainbow's wonder, rushing Colorado splash, as fragrant freedom's liquid wonderland.".
    Another spellbinding masterpiece in natural form.


  • Nicolette gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    "melting more than yesterday's snowstorm"....loved those lines, this weave of nature and love... the two can never be without the other. I wish you many blushing, melting seasons, overflowingly so ...sighs, don't we all wish for that...

    ~ Nicolette


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    This does melt more than snowstorm, it melts hearts...
    This is beautiful and as always, a touch of nature's glory blended in to speak of true wonder...Your poetry shows that beauty starts with the land...

    Lynda


  • lilAj
    February 9, 2008
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    wow
    I am truly amazed
    ~aj~

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