a misty veil of hidden spray
she tumbles from a high berth
her majesty is almost bridal
we know we cannot once touch
wild and beautiful to see
her picture is a cascade of light
a natural creation to behold
close your eyes to hear the roar
Author notes
photo prompt
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2390/195.jpg?1202569491
A contest entry
- Another Ansel Adams Contest by poetryality.
525 points, ended February 10, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very visual these lines - easy to read and understand. Congratulations on taking HM with this write.
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Wonderful visual imagery placed in these words poets. I can feel the waterfall without your mentioning directly that this is what it is. Stellar! Thank you for this entry and I wish you the best in the challenge.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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