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I Want You...

I want you to touch me,
I want you to kiss,
That spot under my nose,
You know... on my lips.

I want you to hold me,
I want you to stay,
I want you to love me,
For the rest of your days.

I want you to hug me,
I want them to see,
How right we are together,
I'll give you all I can be.

You know; all through this poem,
What I'm saying all is true,
So lets sum it up to those three words...
I guess I'd say: 'I want you'.

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  • Ryno
    February 10, 2008

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    It flows really well, but it is kind of cliche.

    The non-originality made it a little harder to feel something out of this poem, becuase there was no specific emotions, just a wide one.

    But, I do thank-you for the read.