Oh my love
this is a resplendent universe
along charming florae
sublime deluges
graceful nightingales
exquisite companions
aesthetic populace
dazzling sun, poetic moon
and what not?
all they dovetail as mediocre
when I allegorize them
with you
Oh my love...
In a list
A contest entry
- Best Love Poetry Ever Written!!!! Give Me All of Your Passion!!! by Eulb kcalB.
350 points, ended March 28, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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superb
natural word flow and imagery. one among ur best. congrats and best regards,spiritual poet.
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Beautiful write and pic here
Such beauty in this piece and wonder for all to see
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This was absolutely beautiful... the metaphor, the love, and the creative use of the prompt... it was really wonderful, and the last line just brought it all together. I'm so glad I got a chance to read this; you're very talented.
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"they dovetail as mediocre when I allegorize them with you.."...All the most beautiful descriptions of the creation fall short of satisfying when in the presence of the Creator of it all...at least this is how I read these words...Good luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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Lovely write
life is the fantasy made real. It depends upon one perception of what is splendid and what beautiful. Reading this piece is like relivind a wounderful dream. Once again a lovely write.
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This is beautiful. Love is such a timeless, ageless feeling. This poem made me smile.
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Well spoken. Love does that to you.
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sublime deluges
graceful nightingales
exquisite companions
dazzling sun, poetic moon
and what not?
Wow my friend, I just adore reading your words and really respect your gift
Cindy
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